Music Inspector : Jesse's Diary
JESSE'S DIARY
last week Mr.R came to inspect the singing in our school. Mr.R was very tall he had almost no hair, he was wearing black pant's suit , he had high black and red checked socks and gray shoes. At first Mr.R looked friendly but then he shouted . He sent all the big boys in another room to do an exam .
Then Mr.R called two boys to come and sing, they just stood there. Mr.R shouted and said don't just stand there sing .and they started to sing they were so bad it was so funny but no one said thing because we were to scared to.
Then Mr.R called me. I was so scared,but I stood up and started to sing. Mr.R said I sang lovely . I was chuffed with my self.
Bailey
last week Mr.R came to inspect the singing in our school. Mr.R was very tall he had almost no hair, he was wearing black pant's suit , he had high black and red checked socks and gray shoes. At first Mr.R looked friendly but then he shouted . He sent all the big boys in another room to do an exam .
Then Mr.R called two boys to come and sing, they just stood there. Mr.R shouted and said don't just stand there sing .and they started to sing they were so bad it was so funny but no one said thing because we were to scared to.
Then Mr.R called me. I was so scared,but I stood up and started to sing. Mr.R said I sang lovely . I was chuffed with my self.
Bailey
Dear Bailey
ReplyDeleteI was also Jesse. I love your descriptive words.
Yours Sincerely
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I love your interpretation of jesses point of view
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I really like your story Bailey, well done.
ReplyDeleteHaha! Bailey,I really like Jesse's Story! I was very much delighted to read you beautiful blog.
ReplyDeleteNice one Bailey!
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Bailey, I enjoyed your description of the inspector in your first paragraph. Your post is rather short though. I would like to hear more about the way he made you feel.
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